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Improving your grammar and phrasing

Unfortunately, the spelling and grammar programs built into word processing programs will not catch many common grammar, word-choice, and syntax errors. If you struggle mostly with issues like correct punctuation, missing words and typos, incomplete sentences, verb-tense shifts, comma splices, subject-verb agreement, and homophone errors (e.g., using "it's" when "its" should be used), it will be very much worth your while to consider using the free version of Grammarly to assist you in proofreading.

Keep in mind that you shouldn't mindlessly accept all of the suggestions you receive from grammar-improving software, since these programs highlight many issues that require you to determine whether there really is a problem. One advantage to paying close attention to the feedback Grammarly or similar software provides is that these programs can help you to identify areas where you consistently are making errors so you can improve your writing skills.

Software is a particularly poor substitute for careful proofreading to catch awkward phrasing and the use of "sophisticated" words that do not fit the context in which they are being used. Grammar checkers also will not help you to identify poor sentence structure (i.e., "syntax" issues) or poor paragraph structure, where disparate ideas have been jumbled together without transitions, making it hard for the reader to figure out exactly what you are trying to say. If your instructor feedback identifies lots of grammar and phrasing issues, you should start to address the problem by paying much closer attention to the use of punctuation and phrasing when you are reading other authors' writing. Look for patterns and rules for when commas are used, how citations are punctuated, and where dashes, hyphens, semi-colons, parentheses, periods, and quotation marks belong.

If you receive feedback indicating that your writing is hard to follow, the phrasing is awkward, or earn a low "clarity" grade, try reading your writing aloud so that you can do a better job of catching awkward phrasing, paragraphs that do not make sense, and syntax issues. Even students who have a strong command of grammar when speaking often struggle to communicate their ideas elegantly in professional writing. If this sounds like you, eschew the lure of employing "erudite" phrasing unless you are convinced of each declaration's tangible denotation (That is: avoid using “sophisticated” phrasing where you are not certain of each word’s actual meaning within the context you are using it).

Improving your grammar is not something that will just happen without effort and systematic study, and you probably will need to do a little research to address recurring issues. Purdue University's Online Writing Lab (OWL) is a terrific resource for learning how to address specific grammar issues. At a bare minimum, before submitting any paper in my class, please double-check for these very common problems:

Avoid verb tense shifts. OWL has a good set of review exercises if you need general help in this area. Students typically struggle the most in using the correct tense to describe events that started in the past. In most cases, when something both started and finished in the past, use the preterite tense (e.g., I loved baseball when I was a kid). When an event started in the past and is still going on, use the past-imperfect tense (e.g., I have loved baseball since I was a kid). If an event was going on in the past and then a second event started and concluded, use the past-perfect (e.g., I had loved baseball since I was three years old, but when I turned ten, I decided that I liked soccer more).



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